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Deviousness `TimberClipse's dedication to our community is without question. From developing helpful tutorials, to being a community leader in groups such as #fella and #deviant365, you can always find Zev connecting with all areas of our community in order to spread his infectious enthusiasm and inspiring positivity. We are delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2012 to `TimberClipse, congratulations! Read More
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'Happiness is dancing when the drumming is good. '
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Does the Walker choose the Path or the Path the Walker?
I love how I feel a sense of "hazy distance" almost as if I were there and the wind and surroundings were playing tricks on perception. Don't know if I described that properly
Only complaint I have is that the trail of caravan can stretch a little longer into the horizon. Perhaps a hint of oasis in the far distance too, that way you reward the viewers for tracking the caravan all the way to the end.
Good work, faved!
You have always impressed me.
Your interest in classical art pays back style-wise... I see you're managing to render realistic, meticulous images, and still maintain a unique style... I like this a lot.
From the technical side, I think there are come contrast&texture issues with the rider... he's overcontrasted, and things look too smooth. You could also do some more contrasts on the guy in front, use desaturated colors to build the mass... he looks like he was in different global lightning, he doesn't fill up his own space right I think.
You could fix the angle of the hand holding the spear to make it look more dynamic - either rest it on fingers, that would elongate the hand visually and give a different outline (angle of the fingers, and fingers visibility... the fingers and the knucles would form a trapezoid rather than a rhomboid), or change the angle of the hand (rotate a few degrees clockwise) but keep the spear intact, that would stretch the hand out a bit and give it more dynamism, tension, make it more interesting.
Damn does this even make sense
I could redline this someday if you want to...
The parts of focus around the creature are awesome... the person walking near the creature, and the creature's head and leg(s), I like that very much. And the imprints in the sand. And the small rocks in the background. The second critter in the shadow...
You could try diggin out more detail in the stuff those creatures carry on their backs, looks a bit like background rocks at a first glance.
Anyway, take care and keep it up!
thanks man, i love hearing feedback about my work. concerning the things youve pointed out, youre totally right haha. i got too lazy to render/tweak the rider and the stuff on the back XD. thanks for your crit. i really appreciate it
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"Choose you this day whom ye will serve . . . But as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord" - Joshua
love the kind of blurr over the picture... gives it a sense of movement and action...